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Fiction · early piece · a diner, two men, old debts

Till the Wheels Fall Off

Jack and Marty are sitting in a diner.

Jack: "You know what I find fascinating about old diners like this?"

Marty: "The stale coffee or the worn-out seats?"

Jack: "Nah, it’s the stories. Think about it, how many conversations happened right here at this very table?"

Marty: "A fair share of dreams and nightmares, I’d reckon."

Jack: "Exactly. Now pass me the salt, would ya?"

Marty: "Salt won’t fix the mess on that plate."

Jack: "A good conversation can fix a lot more than a bad meal."

Marty: "I prefer conversations that aren’t compensating. Though I suppose we all need to make up for what we didn’t do right."

Marty looks away, his gaze fixed on something outside the diner window. A long silence hangs between them. The food sits on the table. Neither touches it.

Jack: "You ever think about where you’d end up if the cards were dealt differently?"

Marty: "You mean if I didn’t shoot the sheriff?"

Jack: "Exactly. You think you’d have a white picket fence, a dog, and all that jazz?"

Marty: "Nah, I’d probably just have a different gun."

Jack: "You're a real poet, you know that?"

Marty: "I try. Now, about that coffee..."

Jack hands Marty the coffee. Marty stares at it warily but ends up drinking it. As he puts it down he grimaces.

Jack: "I've been coming here for years and the coffee hasn’t improved a bit."

Marty: "Some things never change."

Jack: "Speaking of change, you ever think about leaving this town?"

Marty: "And miss all this? Not a chance."

Jack: "What's 'all this' you’re afraid of missing? The cops? The coffee? The constant looking over your shoulder?"

Marty: "I suppose it’s the people that make living worthwhile.”

Jack sits in silence.

Jack: "You’re a rare breed."

Marty: "Just well-marinated in reality."

Jack: "Remember that time we found ourselves in that poker game down in Tijuana?"

Marty: "How could I forget? The stakes were higher than a kite in a hurricane."

Jack: "But you played it cool, even when that guy pulled a blade."

Marty: "Well, bluffing's the same in cards as in life, you just gotta have a poker face."

Jack: "And a fast hand."

Marty: "That too."

Jack: "I was just thinking life’s a bit like that game of cards, don’t you think?"

Marty: "Yeah, and the house always wins in this one too."

Jack: "True, and we can’t do anything but play the hand we’re dealt. But every now and then, you get a wild card."

Marty: "Or a joker."

Jack: "Ever think about what it means to be a joker in a world full of kings and queens?"

Marty: "No, but I reckon you’re about to tell me."

Jack: “Means you get to laugh while the world burns.”

Marty: "I’d sooner have no laughing and no burning."

Jack: "You ever get tired of this life?"

Marty: "Every day. But then I wake up and do it all over again."

Jack: "A vicious cycle."

Marty: "But it’s our cycle."

Jack: "Till the wheels fall off, huh?"

Marty: "Till the wheels fall off."

Sean Patten · an early piece, written with AI help · published as written, 2026